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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Dave_W" data-source="post: 158915" data-attributes="member: 9521">Very nice! I think it's technically very well done. Your color scheme/saturation definitely has a velvia-like feel to it. I does feel a little asymmetric being anywhere but the very center but I think this is a personal choice and others can argue that a broken symmetry adds something to the work. The only trouble I have is the storyline, it almost seems like it's missing something, like a kid's head or a bird or a flag or even a strange cloud to balance out the composition. It's as if the image is pulling you somewhere but then leaves you hanging at the last minute. I would rate this an 11 out of 12 with the point taken away for Story Telling.</blockquote>