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<blockquote data-quote="Rick M" data-source="post: 63236" data-attributes="member: 4399">In my opinion, 8/12. This is a good capture of a dramatic scene, but as stated, lacking punch.-1, Technical- post processing. The color is dull, perhaps you could punch it up a bit.-1, Composition- The curvature to the building to the right needs correction, or perhaps cropping to eliminate the sky to the far right. Cropping out some of the right and bottom will bring us closer to the magnificent sky and highlighted trees.-1, Lighting- I wonder if active D would have helped here to make the bottom portion more meaningful. Perhaps cropping off the majority of the bottom third would take the focus off this dead space and put even more focus on the clouds.-1 impact- Great subject, I don't feel any of the awe of what you probably saw.This shot has allot of potential, I'm considering this lens and am happy to see good results.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Rick M, post: 63236, member: 4399"] In my opinion, 8/12. This is a good capture of a dramatic scene, but as stated, lacking punch. -1, Technical- post processing. The color is dull, perhaps you could punch it up a bit. -1, Composition- The curvature to the building to the right needs correction, or perhaps cropping to eliminate the sky to the far right. Cropping out some of the right and bottom will bring us closer to the magnificent sky and highlighted trees. -1, Lighting- I wonder if active D would have helped here to make the bottom portion more meaningful. Perhaps cropping off the majority of the bottom third would take the focus off this dead space and put even more focus on the clouds. -1 impact- Great subject, I don't feel any of the awe of what you probably saw. This shot has allot of potential, I'm considering this lens and am happy to see good results. [/QUOTE]

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