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<blockquote data-quote="STM" data-source="post: 149361" data-attributes="member: 12827"><p>The out of focus woman in the background is rather distracting and the vignetting seems overdone to me. The far eye is also slightly out of focus. If you clone her out, then there is too much wasted negative space to the right of the subject. I cloned her out and changed the crop to place the subject's right eye on a vertical third, sharpened the far eye and darkened the area around the far eye a little bit. </p><p></p><p><img src="http://i1338.photobucket.com/albums/o690/photodotnet/portrait_zps00715c7d.jpg" alt="" class="fr-fic fr-dii fr-draggable " style="" /></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="STM, post: 149361, member: 12827"] The out of focus woman in the background is rather distracting and the vignetting seems overdone to me. The far eye is also slightly out of focus. If you clone her out, then there is too much wasted negative space to the right of the subject. I cloned her out and changed the crop to place the subject's right eye on a vertical third, sharpened the far eye and darkened the area around the far eye a little bit. [IMG]http://i1338.photobucket.com/albums/o690/photodotnet/portrait_zps00715c7d.jpg[/IMG] [/QUOTE]
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