Constructive Criticism please

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rennocneb

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Horoscope Fish

Horoscope Fish

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I'd like to see a little more "breathing room" on the right edge of the frame. It falls right against the edge of her foot making the shot feel a little cramped. Framing it this way would also have placed her eye perfectly in line using the golden ratio as a guide. The overall exposure is good though I might be seeing some blown out highlights on the left side of her face, depending on what viewer I use, with Photoshop making it look the most extreme. I like the pose, the angle and think the lighting is well done; it's a well done and engaging shot overall in my opinion with room for a couple minor improvments.

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Pretzel

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I'll second (third) the cramped feel. The edge being so close to her foot makes me curl my own toes! :) I, for one, also wonder what it would look like with the whole skirt in the picture.

Other than those minor tweaks, FANTASTIC pose, angle of shot and lighting!
 
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Bill16

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I agree with the need for more space around her on both sides. I also think it would be better if she wasn't wearing the leggings. It seemed a little distracting when seeing the photo larger, the way the leggings end at her ankles. But that is just a very minor thing I guess.
Great shot though! :D
 
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Mike D90

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And I will add that they are just too busy for me. The model is pretty and I think the overall focus should be on her. Too much stuff visible in the background and stuff surrounding her tempting my eye away from her.
 
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