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<blockquote data-quote="ohkphoto" data-source="post: 61723" data-attributes="member: 1573"><p><strong>Lighting</strong>: I love the soft lighting on her face . . . very flattering, which is what most ladies like. Not overly contrasty. Her eyes are sharp and expressive . . . that's the first place my eyes go. It would be nice to add a little bit of hairlight or backlighting to her hair to give a little more dimension.</p><p></p><p><strong>Exposure</strong>: I think you have that pretty perfect. Nothing blown out , and nothing overly dark.</p><p></p><p><strong>Composition</strong>: Center of interest is definitely her eyes. I'm not sure what the end result is supposed to be. . . if it's just a headshot for a "yearbook" or business flyer, I would say it's fine. If it's for a portrait, I think you could use a little more creativity in posing . . . Even including her hand in a natural "movement" like brushing her hair from her face, etc. I know it can be tricky to get the hands and fingers just right, but it sure does add interest. The 3/4 view is perfect . . . I think the whole photo needs some "lines of flow", e.g. keep the 3/4 view, but have her lean forward a little more.</p><p></p><p>Very nice photo of a pretty lady.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="ohkphoto, post: 61723, member: 1573"] [B]Lighting[/B]: I love the soft lighting on her face . . . very flattering, which is what most ladies like. Not overly contrasty. Her eyes are sharp and expressive . . . that's the first place my eyes go. It would be nice to add a little bit of hairlight or backlighting to her hair to give a little more dimension. [B]Exposure[/B]: I think you have that pretty perfect. Nothing blown out , and nothing overly dark. [B]Composition[/B]: Center of interest is definitely her eyes. I'm not sure what the end result is supposed to be. . . if it's just a headshot for a "yearbook" or business flyer, I would say it's fine. If it's for a portrait, I think you could use a little more creativity in posing . . . Even including her hand in a natural "movement" like brushing her hair from her face, etc. I know it can be tricky to get the hands and fingers just right, but it sure does add interest. The 3/4 view is perfect . . . I think the whole photo needs some "lines of flow", e.g. keep the 3/4 view, but have her lean forward a little more. Very nice photo of a pretty lady. [/QUOTE]
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