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<blockquote data-quote="billpics" data-source="post: 830597" data-attributes="member: 55747">You've received a lot of comment on your pics, but do continue exploring atmospheric mood, composition, and learning. You are on the right track.1. The pics of the river feels like the scene is tilting to the left. Maybe rotate the image to the right just a tad.2. The overall composition and tones of the pier picture are nice, but consider darkening the foreground using your photo editing app. Lead the viewer further into your composition. Landscapes by Ansel Adams serve as good examples. Also, think of that pier composition as having 3 broad lines. Where do these lines lead the viewer? In this case... out of the frame. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite3" alt=":(" title="Frown&nbsp; &nbsp; :(" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":(" /> Perhaps revisit the pier if possible and explore other vantage points, there may be some rewarding possibilities... piers are intriguing.&nbsp; [ATTACH=full]416855[/ATTACH]</blockquote>

[QUOTE="billpics, post: 830597, member: 55747"] You've received a lot of comment on your pics, but do continue exploring atmospheric mood, composition, and learning. You are on the right track. 1. The pics of the river feels like the scene is tilting to the left. Maybe rotate the image to the right just a tad. 2. The overall composition and tones of the pier picture are nice, but consider darkening the foreground using your photo editing app. Lead the viewer further into your composition. Landscapes by Ansel Adams serve as good examples. Also, think of that pier composition as having 3 broad lines. Where do these lines lead the viewer? In this case... out of the frame. :( Perhaps revisit the pier if possible and explore other vantage points, there may be some rewarding possibilities... piers are intriguing. [ATTACH type="full"]416855[/ATTACH] [/QUOTE]

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