It's a nice composition but IMO it's a bit overcooked with the HDR. I'd be interested in seeing it with a little (or lot) less HDR. I also think this may work well as a B&W landscape image
Unfortunately the blown out sky ruins it for me. Was the HDR in PP or at time of shoot? If in PP I would have exposed for the sky and then adjusted the shadows to suit and the applied HDR to it.