Bend to the Bridge

[robinchun]

DSC_0002 by robin chun, on Flickr

Nikon D3100/18-55mm.. 1/40 @ f7.1 iso 200

I'd like to ask..does the composition work i.e the track and the fence posts or should the fence posts have been left out so as to bring in more of the track?
Thank you

Robin

 

[Marcel]

I think I would have liked to see the left rail starting from the corner instead of above it. My eyes are distracted by the rail that is above the actual photo corner. I like the fence post and think if you had moved back a bit and to the left you could have had the left rail in the corner and keep the post about where it is now.

Just my opinion. Try to crop it so the rail is right in the corner and see what YOU think.

 

[nikonpup]

i like marcel's suggestion, i did a quick crop and it looks nice. Keep the posts.

 

[robinchun]

Thanks guys, cropped as suggested..


DSC_0002_01 by robin chun, on Flickr

Robin

 

[RockyNH_RIP]

Thanks guys, cropped as suggested..


DSC_0002_01 by robin chun, on Flickr

Robin

Wow, such a subtle difference and it really affects the end product! Nice job!
(Marcel, amazing how you saw that!)

Pat in NH