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ewick

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Im looking to do more fitness stuff but first I have to start somewhere right? C&C apprecited

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wud

wud

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The first 2 are awesome! Text on the second are a little messy though.

The third has to much room of nothing around it, imo.
 
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PapaST

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I share the same sentiment as wud on all three. My only tiny gripe is the skullcap on the dude. To me, I think it would help to lose it or lighten it up a tad. Very nice.
 
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Sandpatch

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It's just my old skool eyes, but the people look rather freaky and unattractive to me. If these photos appeared in a magazine, I'd pass by them without a second look. Again, it's just me and I'm not likely the target market for such.
 
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FastGlass

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Sandpatch said:
It's just my old skool eyes, but the people look rather freaky and unattractive to me. If these photos appeared in a magazine, I'd pass by them without a second look. Again, it's just me and I'm not likely the target market for such.
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Portraits of fitness people are suppose to look edgy. Especially on someone having tatoos. The light is meant to show the muscle tone. Having light that is softer hides allot of the character.
 
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hark

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The first two are a little dark--there isn't enough separation between them and their backgrounds. The third one has separation between them and their background, but both of the people appear a little too dark. I can't see enough detail on their faces.

I worked in a health club for years. The bodies of these models are quite sculpted, but I'm not fond of the tattoos. I've seen bodies with tattoos but am having a hard time trying to decide if their sculpted bodies or the tattoos are the subject in the first two photos.
 
Woodyg3

Woodyg3

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To me, they all look too dark. The third shot needs more contrast. I like the composition on all three quite a bit. As has been said, I would crop the final shot tighter.
 
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