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<blockquote data-quote="Moab Man" data-source="post: 149068" data-attributes="member: 11881"><p>Repeating what Don said. The black and white aspect of it looks really good. The framing of your model in the picture needs work. A little bit more lighting of her face. </p><p></p><p>I also wonder if a softening of the model, in Photoshop a Gaussian Blur, might improve the photo as the image is sharp - lol which is so many times what we are striving for.</p><p></p><p>Did a little cropping down to put her eyes in a more pleasing position IMO and got rid of all that dead space. As for the chopping of arms... I couldn't do anything with that. I also applied a slight softening (Gaussian Blur) to the photo and lightened it a bit for the face but the brightness to the side is quite a bit brighter.</p><p></p><p>[ATTACH]36743[/ATTACH]</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Moab Man, post: 149068, member: 11881"] Repeating what Don said. The black and white aspect of it looks really good. The framing of your model in the picture needs work. A little bit more lighting of her face. I also wonder if a softening of the model, in Photoshop a Gaussian Blur, might improve the photo as the image is sharp - lol which is so many times what we are striving for. Did a little cropping down to put her eyes in a more pleasing position IMO and got rid of all that dead space. As for the chopping of arms... I couldn't do anything with that. I also applied a slight softening (Gaussian Blur) to the photo and lightened it a bit for the face but the brightness to the side is quite a bit brighter. [ATTACH=CONFIG]36743._xfImport[/ATTACH] [/QUOTE]
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