Another Bum Hotel Pic

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Cowboybillybob1

Senior Member
Please let me know what you think of this. Good and bad comments welcome.

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BackdoorArts

Senior Member
I could only wish for a straighter line with the graffiti'd wall, but what are you gonna do?

I do find the brightness of the area above and below the wall to be a little distracting. If you could tame those areas (not including the overhang of the building, but between that and the wall) it would have a little more impact. Tough to do with the tree, I know.
 
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KWJams

Senior Member
Having the tree dead center is confusing. Looking at it I am not sure if it is the main story of the picture, or the back ground is.

Maybe move it a panel or two sideways and crop out some of the lower foreground clutter will help the picture tell a story.

It is an interesting picture. :cool:
 
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Cowboybillybob1

Senior Member
Tracsoft - Don Kuykendall said:
I like it as is. I think it tells a story.
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Thanks Don. I feel it tells a story as well. The tree is tired and old but still looking to bloom in the spring. The graffiti also depicts decay but there is still joy in it. The colours are bright and hopefull.

I imagine if I spent more time it could have been marginally better but I was frezzing my butt off. Besides this is not the safest place to hang out.

Thanks to all for your comments. I take them all seriously in hopes of improving my technique and ability to communicate through photography.
 
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Dave_W

The Dude
I like it! A frame within a frame images are always a hit. The one thing I would try is backing up a bit so you fully frame the image with additional image. Other than that, very nice
 
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