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<blockquote data-quote="Sambr" data-source="post: 83203" data-attributes="member: 6373">I think you need to practice some more, especially if you are going to charge them. I don't want to come off sounding harsh, only because I agree with you. Photo 1&nbsp; - cute shot however get rid of the boot it looks out of place &amp; odd.2 &amp; 3 need cropping a fast prime&nbsp; 1.8 or 1.4 would of really helped the DOF.10 - they look like they are strangers waiting at a bus stop get them to be more in involved with each other. Plus the shot is out of focus a good cropping to get rid of the distracting &quot;oof flowers in the front&quot;.No.11 you are not doing her any favors with this photo - her posture is horrible. Have her change position. Hats off to you for taking the plunge, you will get better with more experince. Keep being critically of your work strive for perfection - folks that sugar coat your errors or are afraid to hurt your feelings are not looking after your best interest. Remember there will times where you wouldn't get a second chance to re shoot.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Sambr, post: 83203, member: 6373"] I think you need to practice some more, especially if you are going to charge them. I don't want to come off sounding harsh, only because I agree with you. Photo 1 - cute shot however get rid of the boot it looks out of place & odd. 2 & 3 need cropping a fast prime 1.8 or 1.4 would of really helped the DOF. 10 - they look like they are strangers waiting at a bus stop get them to be more in involved with each other. Plus the shot is out of focus a good cropping to get rid of the distracting "oof flowers in the front". No.11 you are not doing her any favors with this photo - her posture is horrible. Have her change position. Hats off to you for taking the plunge, you will get better with more experince. Keep being critically of your work strive for perfection - folks that sugar coat your errors or are afraid to hurt your feelings are not looking after your best interest. Remember there will times where you wouldn't get a second chance to re shoot. [/QUOTE]

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