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Message: <blockquote data-quote="LensWork" data-source="post: 25230" data-attributes="member: 1283"><p>From what I have read that you have posted here, you certainly have the talent for writing. The only suggestion that I will offer is what my first journalism teacher, some 30 years ago, told the class on day one: "Inverted Pyramid". Basically, first tell the reader what you are going to tell them; something that grabs their attention within the first two or three sentences that will make them want to read the rest of the story. Next, give the details in the body of the story. Finally, tell the reader what you just told them; a summation of sorts.</p></blockquote><p></p>