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<blockquote data-quote="rocketman122" data-source="post: 312709" data-attributes="member: 14443">I wont comment on the pictures themselves. I will just note that the basic mistake newcomers to photography do. -the picture with her body in profile mode crouching down and you didnt shoot her feet. we call those here american (sorry if I offend) shots as american photographers seem to do it the most. they do a 7/8 shots of the body and dont shoot from the ankles donw and it just looks unfinished. like the shot was meant to be full body, but composed badly.&nbsp; there are 3 compositions. face/half body/full body and in those there are a bit tighter and wider, but doing 7/8 of a body and not doing the feet looks very off. like the new trend of shooting 7/8 body and not including the head. people try to reinvent the wheel with portraiture and it looks horrible.-the basic is rule of thirds. most of your pics was shot using the middle focus point and composition stayed as such. focus and recompose too much space around the subject horizontally and vertically-compositions are ok but could use a bit fine tuning. that comes with time. when you gain experience youll not only pay attention to the subject but things behind. -exposure needs a little tweaking. but again. minor things that give good picture the total look/polish</blockquote>

[QUOTE="rocketman122, post: 312709, member: 14443"] I wont comment on the pictures themselves. I will just note that the basic mistake newcomers to photography do. -the picture with her body in profile mode crouching down and you didnt shoot her feet. we call those here american (sorry if I offend) shots as american photographers seem to do it the most. they do a 7/8 shots of the body and dont shoot from the ankles donw and it just looks unfinished. like the shot was meant to be full body, but composed badly. there are 3 compositions. face/half body/full body and in those there are a bit tighter and wider, but doing 7/8 of a body and not doing the feet looks very off. like the new trend of shooting 7/8 body and not including the head. people try to reinvent the wheel with portraiture and it looks horrible. -the basic is rule of thirds. most of your pics was shot using the middle focus point and composition stayed as such. focus and recompose too much space around the subject horizontally and vertically -compositions are ok but could use a bit fine tuning. that comes with time. when you gain experience youll not only pay attention to the subject but things behind. -exposure needs a little tweaking. but again. minor things that give good picture the total look/polish [/QUOTE]

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