1st Time Messing with LR5 - Feedback Wanted

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dddwyer1981

Senior Member
Open for any type of feedback, including composition and adjustments. I am taking these from a wheelchair, which makes it a little difficult for me to get in some of the positions I'd like to. Hopefully I'll be back up and walking next month.

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Pretzel

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All quite FANTASTIC shots! REALLY like the one where she's holding a leaf and reaching up! In some, the green looks a little yellow (or hot), but that can probably be fixed with a white balance adjustment or warmth tweak. Nothing horrible at all, though.

I'm guessing that kiddo brings about a million smiles a day? :D
 
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dddwyer1981

Senior Member
Pretzel said:
All quite FANTASTIC shots! In some, the green looks a little yellow (or hot), but that can probably be fixed with a white balance adjustment or warmth tweak. Nothing horrible at all, though.

I'm guessing that kiddo brings about a million smiles a day? :D
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Thanks. I'll keep an eye on the Green hue. She definitely keeps me rolling.

I see your avatar with the motorcycle. That's the reason for me being in the wheelchair. Just totaled my Road Glide Ultra, and messed up my foot pretty bad. Ride safe.
 
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Dave_W

The Dude
These are all really nice, good job. And not to discourage you but this feedback section is really meant for feedback on a single image. For a varity of nice shots like yours, posting them in the 365 section or maybe in Learning Photography would be a better choice. That said, is there one image in particular you would like feedback on or have a question about? If so, why don't you remove the others and the group will get to work on it.
 
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crycocyon

Senior Member
Funny, I saw the original photos. Then they disappeared, then a single photo appeared, and then a post by Dave appeared, all without me reloading the page. Strange things happening here hehe. Overall a good photo perhaps a bit on the bright side.
 
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dddwyer1981

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This is one of the first forums I've participated in that really does update every 5 seconds. The near real time information feed borders on information overload, but its awesome.
 
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Don Kuykendall_RIP

RIP :(
Got to agree, it is a great shot but it is a little on the bright side.

I spent ten years with cane, scooter for anything over 100 feet till I had my knee replaced all due to a motorcycle wreck in 1967
 
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Pretzel

Senior Member
I've got a bit over 60,000 miles with nothing other than a stiff leg from a near accident once. I may or may not have planted a size 12 boot into the driver's side door of a car that angled out in front of me as if I wasn't there. It wasn't intentional, as I instinctively stuck out my foot to try and push/bounce off of the car (dumb move, really), and it jammed up my hip a bit, but it sure was satisfying.
 
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