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<blockquote data-quote="Ranie" data-source="post: 17386" data-attributes="member: 2495">Hi AnthonyI would like to give you my thoughts. For portraits- give yourself a little room. It would look better if the shoulders where includedon the frame. Aside from that, composition wise, its good. We should never cut our subjects on joints(like shoulders, elbows, wrist, knees and ankles) when composingOn camera setting and lighting- ISO 1600 is too high. Bump up the power of your lights. You have a lot of power at your disposal&nbsp; ISO 200-400 would be optimum.- for your kicker light, where was it aimed? I can only see 2 light sources (front and hair)_ hair light looks good- by the way, where and how far was the softbox situated? For over-all tone- i find the white balance a bit saturated. When you whitened the teeth and eyes, you should alsoconsider the skin tone. Over-all, this is a good start. Keep it coming.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Ranie, post: 17386, member: 2495"] Hi Anthony I would like to give you my thoughts. For portraits - give yourself a little room. It would look better if the shoulders where included on the frame. Aside from that, composition wise, its good. We should never cut our subjects on joints (like shoulders, elbows, wrist, knees and ankles) when composing On camera setting and lighting - ISO 1600 is too high. Bump up the power of your lights. You have a lot of power at your disposal ISO 200-400 would be optimum. - for your kicker light, where was it aimed? I can only see 2 light sources (front and hair) _ hair light looks good - by the way, where and how far was the softbox situated? For over-all tone - i find the white balance a bit saturated. When you whitened the teeth and eyes, you should also consider the skin tone. Over-all, this is a good start. Keep it coming. [/QUOTE]

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