another from my first potrait shoot

Byram Lass

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wud

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Overall nice sharpness and composition :) You could bump up the colors a bit, I think. And next time have her do the same, but turn her head and look at you.


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dennybeall

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I like the thought and the composition but would crop about a third from the left side and some from the top. Plus add some pop as mentioned above.
 
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