Some trucks from the Mt Keith nickel mine site in Western Australian desert. Also a shot of one of the Fokker 100 aircraft that flies the workers to and from Perth.
Great shot. The lighting is good and her pose if excellent. :)
I'd crop out the edge of the window on the right as it's a little distracting.
EDIT: Get in close and remove the shapes in the background. I'd be aiming for something like this:
Here's something for discussing over a drink..
It occurred to me that I bought a high end gaming laptop for my photography as I knew it had a really good screen, lots of storage and is powerful.
On that note, is it worth purchasing a cheap LCD so I can 'optimise' the photos for what everyone...