here is one i took yesterday of my girlfriend. i wasnt really shooting BW so i didnt really set my camera appropriately.
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I'd get rid of the edge of the window but leave the rest. It gives her location more of a sense of place, sitting in a room. Cropped too tightly on the top and it is almost like the world is caving in on her head, hehe. There's more drama trying to figure out what she's doing there. Is it her house? Just visiting? Old? New?