Trail of Arches

Dwayne Oakes

Senior Member
Thanks for taking a look !

Take care,
Dwayne Oakes
Dwayne Oakes - Fine Art

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Rick M

Senior Member
Hi Dwayne and welcome to the site!

It would help if you posted the exif data in the critique forum.

This is a fantastic shot! Very creative, is this an HDR?

I would rate this 11/12.

-1 Impact. While is is an excellent shot I find it a bit dull.

BTW- You have some great work in you website and I look forward to seeing more!
 

Dave_W

The Dude
(My first attempt at critique)

Nice composition with great lighting. After reviewing the rating system here and would give it an 11/12, also, but would probably give it a full 12 if it looked less "oil paint-like" and more photographic image-like. It almost looks too manipulated for my tastes, but I don't know if I should apply my personal tastes to a rating because everything else, including the style, is excellent. So maybe I should give it a 12/12 with the caveat that my preference would be a more photographic image.

Btw, I see you're a Zenfolio user, too. I think I'll do the 14-day trial and see how it goes.
 

ohkphoto

Snow White
I have to agree with Rick and Mojo completely. It's a beautiful photo in terms of creativity, composition, a clearly unique style, beautiful lighting. But I have to admit, the reason I kept going back to the photo for a second look was to see if it is a photo or the photo of a painting. So impact is questionable IMHO. Critiques and judging are tough to do especially if there are no clear standards for how far you can go with post processing. So as a photograph, I would rate it 11/12, and as a fine art photograph, 12/12.

In any case, it's a goregeous piece.
 

Dwayne Oakes

Senior Member
Many thanks for the cc and kind words everyone.
Here is the EXIF data. This is an older photo, I now
use a Nikon D7000/55-200mmVR for all of my nature work.
Still the same software, Nikon Capture NX2.

-Nikon D80/Nikkor 18-200mmVR/Nikon Capture NX2
-1/60 second @ f/16 (no tripod used)
-75mm
-ISO 200
-Ev -1 1/3
-Vr On

Editing

-Orton effect added
-Selective color saturation
-Dodge and burn
-NR software added

Take care,
Dwayne Oakes
http://dwayne-oakes.artistwebsites.com/
 
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