Lautermilch
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Nice shot. Two things I notice right away are these:
It's a good shot. It's a little crowded, top and bottom though, so here's what I suggest as far as cropping goes. It moves the subject off-center, brings her eye onto a one-third line, eliminates the needless weight and distracting elements to the sides of the subject and focuses the eye more squarely ON the subject:How about this one?
It's a good shot. It's a little crowded, top and bottom though, so here's what I suggest as far as cropping goes. It moves the subject off-center, brings her eye onto a one-third line, eliminates the needless weight and distracting elements to the sides of the subject and focuses the eye more squarely ON the subject:
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