Lips

STM

Senior Member
I have tried this image all three ways; all color, all black and white and spot color with just the lips. I like this version the best. It really draws the viewer' attention to her full and beautiful lips.

D700, 85mm f/1.4 AIS Nikkor
 

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BackdoorArts

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Very good, but there seems to be too much empty space under the lips. Or it could just be me.

It could be that from a composition perspective you might be expecting to see the lips at that intersection of thirds? I think it has more to do with the subtle transition from chin to neck, and I believe if the shadow under the jawline is burned in just a touch it seems less empty without taking focus away from the lips.

(hope you don't mind)

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