Trying my Hand at Low Key

Comments? Did I get close?


Low Key Black and White by Cakvala-SC, on Flickr

yes but for me the wrist...thingy... is distracting

I'd lose the bracelet, and also the composition is a bit off for me. Just my opinion, but the hands are doing weird things, and seem to be growing out of nowhere. Include them all, or try to exclude as much as you can. Just my opinions, but the lighting looks really nice. Maybe try to open shadows around the eyes just a bit.

Great feedback!

- Remove Bracelet
- Insure Hands / Arms / Etc are visible
- Lighten up the eyes during the shot or in post.

Thank you all!