Silver Cascades

Joseph Bautsch

New member
I got this shot in the White Mountains May 19, 2010. The river is called the Silver Cascades. EXIF Data: D90, 18-105mm VR, Focal Length 18MM, f/11, Shutter Speed 1/50, CPL Filter, White Balance Cloudy, Adobe RGB, Photomatix HDR, Aperture 3 Post Processing.

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Carolina Photo Guy

Senior Member
This is as perfectly balanced a shot as I have ever seen. You have a lot of motion in the water that is counterbalanced by the Foliage. The serenity of the trees are offset by the impending storm shown in the threatening clouds. To top it off, the scattered small boulders and the trees that have been knocked down give a lot of history to the shot.
My ONLY suggestion...

Choose a nice frame with a double mat.

Pete
 

Ruidoso Bill

Senior Member
Serenity, impending, threatening, counterbalanced foliage, man you guys from NC can really sling it, way to go Pete!

I almost had to get out the websters just to make sure I got the meaning of everything.

BTW, beautiful shot Joseph (as usual)...
 

Browncoat

Senior Member
Excellent use of HDR here...I'm very impressed! There's a perfect amount of tonal range and depth. This would make an excellent case study for the proper use of HDR. Very well done!

I would like to see more "pop" in the color, perhaps a slight tweaking of saturation would really bring out the green in those trees. Suggestions: the crop is a bit tight, I want to see the tops of those trees in the background and some sky. There's also something distracting @ bottom right of the frame. Is that something in the water that can be cloned out?
 

Joseph Bautsch

New member
Thanks for the kind comments guys. There is more to the shot than what you see, so I can change the cropping as suggested by Anthony. That something in the water is a tree branch, easy enough to clone out. This is one of several shots to be printed out for a photo contest to be judged in January. Wanted to run it by the experts who hold no punches. It's the best way to find out if I'm just waisting my time or got something worth while. Next problem is to print it out, 8x12. They can look good on the monitor and still not translate into a good print.
 

Browncoat

Senior Member
I definitely think you've got something contest-worthy here, Mr. Bautsch. I know you're not a big fan of B&W, but this is also a great candidate for a conversion.
 

Joseph Bautsch

New member
Ah, good thought Anthony. I'll give it a try and run it by my biggest critic, my wife. If it passes her critique I'll post it here and see what everyone thinks.
 

Joseph Bautsch

New member
I printed out both the color and the B&W versions. Sometimes a shot will look great on a computer screen but still not print very well. It may have something to do with the computer being a radiant media where as the the print is a reflective media. In any case both versions printed out great. The B&W is more of a lithograph drawing which will require a judge that leans more toward the classic arts. Thanks for the suggestion guys.
 

Carolina Photo Guy

Senior Member
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Look at this part of the image and you will see what I mean.
Catfish with the feelers out and mouth open. Eyes on top.
Its really a rock formation, but the fish is what I saw right off the bat.
I guess its the redneck in me.

Pete
 

Red Kite

New member
I have looked and looked until my eyes have crossed and still don't see a catfish :(

(I'll have some of whatever you're on LOL)

JK Pete.x
 
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