Hope you don't take it the wrong way, but it really is difficult to critique an image when there is a watermark splashed across.
Specially when you looking for a critical view of the image, you would want your subject as the main point of interest.
If this image was posted in a daily thread or anywhere else it would've been different
This site does provide some security to your images, like disabling downloading of pics amongst other things, so you could probably post one with a smaller water mark?