Feedback on My Offer To Models?

hark

hark

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My CC: I don't know anything about setting up a web site, but I think you need to work on your About page. Below is what I see--I scrolled down the page to take this screen shot. There isn't any way to scroll sideways. The only way I could fit the entire width of the page on my laptop was to zoom out to 67% on my display for the complete photos to show up. Not sure how many prospective clients will do that.

Your Home page didn't have this problem.

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Needa

Needa

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Your about me has little about me. Like how long you have been in South Florida, how long you have been shooting models or shooting in general. Any professional affiliations? Any of your shoots get the model a job. Any reason you should be their choice other than free. I personally think the offer should not be on your about me page. You could link to it from the About Me page.

Just my 2 cents and no I don't design websites.
 
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Lautermilch

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hark said:
My CC: I don't know anything about setting up a web site, but I think you need to work on your About page. Below is what I see--I scrolled down the page to take this screen shot. There isn't any way to scroll sideways. The only way I could fit the entire width of the page on my laptop was to zoom out to 67% on my display for the complete photos to show up. Not sure how many prospective clients will do that.

Your Home page didn't have this problem.

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To be honest I was referring to the content. I am using a new way to construct Wordpress pages so I did a test page for you
How does this one look - TEST2 - Dean Lautermilch
 
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Lautermilch

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Needa said:
Your about me has little about me. Like how long you have been in South Florida, how long you have been shooting models or shooting in general. Any professional affiliations? Any of your shoots get the model a job. Any reason you should be their choice other than free. I personally think the offer should not be on your about me page. You could link to it from the About Me page.

Just my 2 cents and no I don't design websites.
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I can add some more bio information. I thought the story about me being accused spying would help.
 
hark

hark

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Lautermilch said:
To be honest I was referring to the content. I am using a new way to construct Wordpress pages so I did a test page for you
How does this one look - TEST2 - Dean Lautermilch
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That fits on my screen without any problem. Blah, blah, blah....;) So are you looking for CC on your photos?

Lautermilch said:
Needa said:
Your about me has little about me. Like how long you have been in South Florida, how long you have been shooting models or shooting in general. Any professional affiliations? Any of your shoots get the model a job. Any reason you should be their choice other than free. I personally think the offer should not be on your about me page. You could link to it from the About Me page.

Just my 2 cents and no I don't design websites.
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I can add some more bio information. I thought the story about me being accused spying would help.
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I agree with Needa. The About page should only be about you and your experience as a photographer. What you are offering to do should be on a separate page.
 
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