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- 09-09-2011, 07:52 PM #1Senior Member
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John's Photos
So as I stated in the critique section the other day, I have a little project going and instead of gummin up the critique zone with an image or 2 every day i figured I would just centralize them to one spot and you guys can give me your thoughts as I go.
right now I am exploring new techniques in PS as well as a little project to use only a 50mm for the next week, which is unusual for me. I rarely use this lens and this is going to be one of those eye opening weeks.

- 09-09-2011, 08:07 PM #2
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I really like the feel and composition of the first shot. Any particular effect applied? it looks HDRish. The horizon almost looks painted, nice effect. I have mixed feelings on the DOF, but it does add a surreal feeling in the distance. Might also be interesting to re-visit this shot with a wider angle when you have concluded your 50mm work. I like the second shot but does not give me any feeling like the first. Both nice shots John.
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You might call it a hand blended HDR. It is created with 3 images but by blending by hand I have much more control over the effect. Once I get the basic effect done I also apply some dodge and burn. In the shadows and highlights. I tried with the second image but it was not nearly as attractive to me so I used the original and did some basic corections before also using the dodge and burn tools
- 09-09-2011, 10:56 PM #4
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first one is well composed and a good subject but the effects are over done for MY taste. The second one, well it seams sharp, but the subject matter is lacking. Am I supposed to be looking at the uninteresting rock, the uninteresting post or the flowery weeds? I don't mean to sound harsh, but subject matter is 50% of what makes good photo. Keep at it and keep posting!
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I do plan to go back. This little area is pretty cool and I want to also catch it on a little brighter feeling day.
Not Harsh at all, subject matter can be subjective though. Each person has an idea of what makes a photo work or not. Some like flowers and some like mountains etc. I can honestly say there are many "seasoned" photographers even here that i do not care for their images. It is a matter of taste. While I do have my issues with this image, I focused on the post with the intent to make the rocks and flowering bush seem in focus creating a triangle. My issues with the image had to do with lack of pop so I have since revisited the bracket and resolved that issue
I also do plan to shoot this again because I was unable to get the path to the right into the frame, which IMO would have changed the entire make up of the image
As I have said over and over I am not a fan of over done HDR, BUT the 1st image has stirred up a lot of positive feedback in the last few hours so I am hesitant to change it at all.
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Re: John's Photos
I'm not a big fan of HDR myself, but I must say I like the first shot. I think it looks cool. I'm not so sure about the second shot, though. Doesn't do a thing for me. Maybe, like you said, if you get that path in the shot and re-post, it might make a difference. Good work, bud.
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- 09-12-2011, 05:05 AM #8Senior Member
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Wow, these are fabulous!!!
- 09-12-2011, 12:11 PM #9
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Excellent shots John!
I guess you'll remember when you took these with the flag at half mastLast edited by cnyram; 09-13-2011 at 01:19 AM.
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Thanks guys. I am pretty proud of these. It is literally the first time I have been able to get decent lightning shots so for me it is a "moment" lol
Oddly, I dont know whats up but I noticed a round purple haze in a few of the images near center. IDK if it is my camera or the lens or just some type of reflection. I do know I need to clean the sensor though.
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