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cichy1012

Senior Member
So I attempted to photograph a toddler. Whew, they sure move around alot. Well anyhow, its my first attempt at this. Tried lightroom 5 again. Its still a beast to me. Guess it takes awhile.

Thanks in advance for the critique. DSC_0104.jpgDSC_0108.jpgDSC_0114.jpg
 

wud

Senior Member
I'm looking from phone but from this, it seems you've made some great images :) I like them, the expressions are very good and I think your edit suits it well.
 

Elliot87

Senior Member
I like the look of the shots, captured the subject well and the editing looks quite good to me. My main criticism is with the composition.

I don't like that the hands are cut off in the first shot, it might also look better with the toddler in the left of the shot.

The second and third shots again would look better in my opinion if he was on the left of frame, giving him more space to look into. It would only need to be subtle change but I think it would help.

I like the lower angle the third shot is taken from, I'd look to replicate that with the other shots too.

Overall excellent first attempt, keep taking pictures and having fun!
 
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