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<blockquote data-quote="Joseph Bautsch" data-source="post: 3585" data-attributes="member: 654"><p>I would have to agree with jdeg and say the first one. It's a bit brighter with better contrast. I really like the color and play of shadows about the instruments. The DOF is good. I would try to something about the over exposed sheet music in the center. The white spot is distracting. The first thing the eye is drawn to are highlights. Maybe you can use some post processing to bring out the music printed on the sheet. My suggestion and if I were taking the shot I would zero in on the sheet music and frame it so there are the instruments around it. The sheet music is in landscape format framing it that way would probably work best. There is a lot of great color with a lot of shadows playing about the instruments and on the sheet music. The neck of the violin with its tuning knobs break up the rectangular lines of the sheet music and adds interest and supports the whole composition. I would also get my wife or girlfriend to stand off to the side so her reflection shows in the glass over the music sheet. I think that would add a human touch and interest.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Joseph Bautsch, post: 3585, member: 654"] I would have to agree with jdeg and say the first one. It's a bit brighter with better contrast. I really like the color and play of shadows about the instruments. The DOF is good. I would try to something about the over exposed sheet music in the center. The white spot is distracting. The first thing the eye is drawn to are highlights. Maybe you can use some post processing to bring out the music printed on the sheet. My suggestion and if I were taking the shot I would zero in on the sheet music and frame it so there are the instruments around it. The sheet music is in landscape format framing it that way would probably work best. There is a lot of great color with a lot of shadows playing about the instruments and on the sheet music. The neck of the violin with its tuning knobs break up the rectangular lines of the sheet music and adds interest and supports the whole composition. I would also get my wife or girlfriend to stand off to the side so her reflection shows in the glass over the music sheet. I think that would add a human touch and interest. [/QUOTE]
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